Love In Paradise

Category: Love/Romance

by MysticAngel68 — Posted August 03, 2009

Like whispers in the wind,
I hear your voice, calling out to me
Beckoning me to come,
Embrace you like there's no tomorrow

Leave my worries behind,
Gaze into the eyes of the future
See what might lie ahead,
Be enveloped by eternity's flame

Allow our emotions to unite,
Become a reflection of who we are
To emulate our deepest feelings,
Epitomize the essence of true love

Take our inspirations,
Turn them into lasting memories
Etch them into our hearts,
So we can breathe life into our dreams

Forget about the past,
Live in the present and the future
Know what we have is real,
That nothing will ever separate us

Interfere with our dreams,
Or our pursuit for lasting happiness
Just you and I alone,
Creating the ultimate paradise

Comments by: dahmom
David, what a beautiful romantic poem. I am impressed by the imagery and tender emotions. The kind that fill our hearts with all the wonders of love! Hugs Benita

Comments by: Dulcinea
"Creating the ultimate paradise"...beautiful. This is awesome, David...I love this side of you - loving and romantic. What a quest - to find someone to share the ultimate paradise...fantastic. Dulcinea

Author's Response: Thank you for such an awesome and most encouraging review. I'm so thrilled that you ejoyed it so much. Thanks again, David

Comments by: Rhymer
This poem really reaches into the heart of the writer and the reader for answers and for the remembering of good memories. Great writing. :) Marie

Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful review. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks again, David

Comments by: martin
WOW David. You are really excelling with this poetic creation. It is uncanny how unique you have become in your poetic crafting and word paintings leaving so much to the imagination of the reader. Yet, your words speak like beacons at the height of life and shines as the zenith of the sun bringing new life.
Unparalleled in my books. martin

Author's Response:

Thank you for such an awesome and most encouraging review. I'm so thrilled you enjoyed it so much. Thanks again, David

Comments by: S A Holley
This was a beautiful poem. I enjoyed the read

Author's Response: Thank you so kindly for your kind words. So glad you enjoyed reading it. Thanks again, David

Comments by: Golfshe
Good one, David, your writing has grown in the best of ways and in tons! So nice to see you! ss

Author's Response: Thank you for all your kind words. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks again, David

Comments by: LadyFair

Beautiful verse that expresses
the deep desire of the soul
for love, joy and peace to become
a reality in this earthly realm of life.
Thoughts to ponder.
Enjoyed the reading,
Thank you for sharing,
LadyFair/Bev

Author's Response:

Thank you, greatly appreciate your kind words. So thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks again, David

Comments by: queen
This is beautiful. ab

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. David