Song Of Spring

Category: Nature/Creation

by ligacl — Posted March 17, 2010



Cascading crescendo

of croaking chorus

in plethora of ponds

from recent rains.
 

Hyacinths heady aroma

filling air with sweet scent,

jonquils, daffodils and tulips

doing their dazzling dance.
 

Lawns with an emerald sheen,

donning new Spring cloaks,

birds busy making new nests

as welcoming songs trill from throats

 

Copyright © ligacl, 03/17/2010

Comments by: Cookie
How Beautiful Linda
A sweet refrain that glides through all ones senses. Melodious and artistically penned.WOW!! What a gift you possess.
Love Cookie

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Cookie for your most lovely comments! I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Linda
Comments by: Golfshe
What can I say, except, beautifully and artfully crafted to my mind.  Glorious color and blend of life!  S

Author's Response: Thank you, Sheri, for such a great review! It's much appreciated. Linda
Comments by: cottonwood
Thanks for awakening Spring.  I am very anxious to get outside and work with
my flowers.  bob

Author's Response: Thank you, Bob! We seem to get Spring a little earlier down south and I think it's finally here. So glad you enjoyed it! Linda
Comments by: martin
WOW all you need is music to go with these lyrics. All PFI needs is the ability for members to read their poems aloud on site. Some day way down the road you will have, as others, an opportunity to travel that journey.
Unparalleled and kudos unlimited. martin

Author's Response: Thank you, martin! The sights and sound were too much to not write about. I think Spring has sprung! Linda
Comments by: Dulcinea
Oh my lanta, this made my heart sing!  Well done in every possible way - love the word choice - 'cascading crescendo', 'croaking chorus', 'plethora', 'heady aroma', dazzling dance'...okay, okay - the whole darn poem is fantastic!  Love the rhythm.  Most excellent!  Dulcinea


Author's Response: Thank you, Dulcinea! I got caught up listening to the sounds and seeing sights as Spring is making itself noticed! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Linda