Poetry Is.....
Category: Inspirational
by Rhymer — Posted April 02, 2010|
Poetry is for lovers all across the world, Words in hearts to be unfurled, Poetry is for farmers all across the world Words in the hearts to be unfurled.
Poetry is made for each one there is around But each one seldom is found, Each one is not set for poetry in this our time Don't even enjoy it, a crime?
Maybe not, I am not set for football games true My hearts needs it won't subdue, This is why I like Poets Integrity tons They enjoy, even reruns.
Catch a word as it flies through the cold windy air Add a word of warmth to share, Mix a few others of joy in this brand-new poem Keep it simple and your home.
By, Marie D. Glass 04-02-2010 |
| Copyright © Rhymer, 04/02/2010 |
Author's Comments:
Just playing around with this oneComments by: amiller
Poetry is...people like you.
Well done.
art
Author's Response: thank you Art. :) Marie
Poetry is...people like you.
Well done.
art
Author's Response: thank you Art. :) Marie
Comments by: cobaltcat09
I really like your first six lines. Would you consider moving them aourd so the repetition of them isn't enjambed into the beginning? Just a thought. To be honest I'm glad you stopped the repetition when you did. I probably wouldn't have read this if I had seen it continue, but moving the repeating lines to the beginning of other stanzas might give more cohesiveness.
At any rate, I did enjoy this and think it's excellent.
~~Beth
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments on this Beth. I am glad that you enjoyed it. :) Marie
I really like your first six lines. Would you consider moving them aourd so the repetition of them isn't enjambed into the beginning? Just a thought. To be honest I'm glad you stopped the repetition when you did. I probably wouldn't have read this if I had seen it continue, but moving the repeating lines to the beginning of other stanzas might give more cohesiveness.
At any rate, I did enjoy this and think it's excellent.
~~Beth
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments on this Beth. I am glad that you enjoyed it. :) Marie
Comments by: Carl Harris
Though I enjoy reading and writing poetry myself, I am also an avid sports fan, fisherman, and even photographer myself, Marie. More importantly, I am a doting grandfather as well! I enjoyed your fine poem and loved the simpliticity and directness of your excellent phrasing in this charming write. Carl.
Author's Response: Thank you Carl. I'm glad that you enjoyed this. :) Have a great day! Marie
Though I enjoy reading and writing poetry myself, I am also an avid sports fan, fisherman, and even photographer myself, Marie. More importantly, I am a doting grandfather as well! I enjoyed your fine poem and loved the simpliticity and directness of your excellent phrasing in this charming write. Carl.
Author's Response: Thank you Carl. I'm glad that you enjoyed this. :) Have a great day! Marie
Comments by: martin
Keep playing. This is a reminder that all need from time to time and you have captured it in word and photo. Most, most unique and universal. martin
Author's Response: Thank you Martin for your kind thoughts. :) Marie
Keep playing. This is a reminder that all need from time to time and you have captured it in word and photo. Most, most unique and universal. martin
Author's Response: Thank you Martin for your kind thoughts. :) Marie
Comments by: Cookie
Happy Easter Marie
This is very witty and cleverly creative.
My first morning smile You made my day.
excellent job
Love Cookie
Author's Response: Thank you Cookie, I am so glad that it was a blessing to you. Have a wonderful day and Easter. :)
Marie
Happy Easter Marie
This is very witty and cleverly creative.
My first morning smile You made my day.
excellent job
Love Cookie
Author's Response: Thank you Cookie, I am so glad that it was a blessing to you. Have a wonderful day and Easter. :)
Marie
Comments by: Golfshe
Excellent, Marie! You just keep getting better and better! I really enjoyed this! Exceptionally fun and wondrously creative! S
Author's Response: Thank you Sherri, for your kind thoughts. Do have a wonderful day. :) Marie
Excellent, Marie! You just keep getting better and better! I really enjoyed this! Exceptionally fun and wondrously creative! S
Author's Response: Thank you Sherri, for your kind thoughts. Do have a wonderful day. :) Marie